Been working on this shot a lot. Overall it's getting closer and closer to what I want. I recently went back and saw a much earlier version of this and it's cool to see how much progress has been made. I'm entering polish on this one but there are still a few things that are bugging me.
Here are notes to address:
- Frame by frame the elbow when it contacts/stays on the arm rest. (Note to self - Elbow pins suck!)
- Adjust the timing of the smile (scoot it later and add ease in)
- Add some time to the pull down of the mouth
- After f93, the head hits so add more ease in and keep-alive. Specifically rx and rz to push the expression
- For the take, Give the head more orient (make it more straight) again make sure nothing hits a wall
- For the take, as the hands translates in a more tense pose, make sure that tension is felt through the rest of the arm - This is something I should make sure throughout the shot to avoid IK feeling hands
- For the take add shoulders going slightly down. (almost like they're staying in the same position. It will help with breaking up the movement.)
- Also when he slumps into the seat, try and make his line of his torso more in a C shape to create a better silhouette and push the expression.
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